Friday, 3 November 2017

STORYBOARD ALTERATIONS


  • 23) Cut shot
  • 35) Continued shot of her stepping towards the bathroom mirror and taking a shard of plant pot from her head.
  • 36) POV from Sam at the top of the stairs of Mara looking up at him and grinning with dialogue.
  • 39) First rotating shot is not included.
  • 44) Side shot, cut rotating shot
  • 50) Sam: 'she's-'  Mara says 'dead.'
  • 51) Mara continues with 'dead cool, right?' as she is stirring the tea without touching the spoon, Insert Sam looking shocked at the cup, not at her.
  • 55) Shot of Sam laughing along with her.
  • 66) INSERT SHOT
  • 67) INSERT SHOT
  • 70) Instead of the scene in the graveyard, Mara is trying get Sam to shoot her for a joke. She is pushing the rifle into his arms, Sam is refusing, and in the confusion and struggle she pulls the trigger for him (handheld camera, close up shots, fast editing). A mid-close up Sam, barrel is the focal point of the frame, his face is shocked. Long/ birds eye view view shot of Mara lying on the floor a few feet away, supposedly injured (she's playing dead). A mid- close up of Sam as Mara suddenly appears behind his shoulder and says 'nice shot'.

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